June 14 - Task 2

Discipline is a growing problem in modern schools. Some people think that parents should discipline their own children, while others think it should be the responsibility of the government.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The answer belongs to Bawa Ielts Ferozepur. 

While some people argue that parents should take sole responsibility for disciplining their children, others take the view that the government ought to be in charge of such matters. In my opinion, the young generation should be primarily guided by their parents where rules of behaviour and moral principles are concerned. However, in some instances government intervention is necessary.

On one side of the argument, a few people hold the opinion that the duty of penalising a child falls squarely on parents' shoulders, since they are their first educators, and it is their obligation to equip their children with good manners and morals even before their first day at school. In addition, every family has a unique understanding of what a suitable form of discipline entails. Therefore, some parents are concerned that any form of punishment meted out at school might be too harsh. To overcome this issue, they believe that parents should be informed by the school of their child's wrongdoing so that they can decide an appropriate consequence for their behaviour at home.

Unfortunately, not all parents are objective enough to make the right decisions when it comes to the upbringing of their offspring. Some may need more information or sound moral background to discipline their children in a meaningful way. Therefore, the state should shoulder some of the responsibility by implementing a strict set of guidelines and policies on how to discipline children at school. Such policies result in children who flourish and are more likely to become productive citizens that actively contribute to a prosperous nation. Also, this would help both parents and teachers understand which punishments are suitable for minor infractions like missing an assignment or major incidents like bullying or skipping school.

In conclusion, while both views are commonly held in society, I believe that the government must be actively involved in the policies related to discipline at schools as this would ensure the well-being and successful development of the youth.