Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
Part 3 belongs to all new cue cards from September to December 2022. We have written the answers on our own except for one topic. Hence, we hold the copyright status of the answers written by us. 1. Describe an object you find particularly beautiful (For example, a painting, sculpture, piece of jewellery/furniture, etc.). 1. Do you think there are more beautiful things now than in the past? In my opinion, traditional art and sculptures are much more captivating. I think in the past, it was easier for artists to find shoppers in the form of kings and nobles and they could focus on their art without any financial worries. However, today it is much harder to earn money as an artist. The art being made today also reflects that – it is done more as a hobby rather than as a profession and the works produced are far behind those of the past. Moreover, nowadays artists rely on machine work instead of handmade items. 2. Do you think there are many scenic spots in India
These days , it is mostly observed that an individual when migrate to other country , they carry their family with him in search of highly paid job . Therefore , this essay will address both merit and demerit of this on family .
ReplyDeleteTo begin with , on the one hand , moving abroad has plenty of merits . The primary aspect is that unemployment ratio . To be more precise, in developed nation their has less unemployed individuals but undeveloped nation such as India , Pakistan, and unemployment proportion in these countries are much higher than expected. Besides , people nowadays travel to abroad with their family owing to which they can live together and has not long distance relationship left or untill they have to wait to get citizenship there to call their family .
Yet another aspect is that they want their child to study in good school colleges and get more knowledge and to do job in multinational companies like, Amazon , Microsoft , Google Tata Industries . Furthermore, in growing nations schools mainly focus on theoretical knowledge and students ,lack in practical skills ; on the contrary , fully evolved nations focuses on both practical and theoretical knowledge so students will flourish their skills . Owing to these reasons individuals leave their country to work abroad and take family with them for family development .
On the other hand , one of the negatives about going overseas is styibg there with family as boosted nations are too expensive; however it is difficult to handle only individual expenses then how come family . Heading futher, children start losing his cultural and tradional values. For instance , in a recent survey of cambridge university surveys that approximately 40% of students who are immigrants had forgotten about his culture. Moving to other country may cause depression and stress, after moving he lost his friend and feels tough to make new one due to language barrier and inconvenient to communicate with them .
To conclude , i assert that , live unemployed in undeveloped nation with family as is not better option to live rather than living in a fully developed country with a job ignoring expenses . Conversely, it will be a good way to enhance knowledge and skills with full family . Hereby , i am of the opinion that upsides outweigh the downsides
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Dear, I believe, if you follow our tutor’s way to manipulate sentences, it will be more fruitful such as our educator constantly asks us to use thesis life before paraphrasing the notion and write maximum in present perfect instead of using passive formations. Besides, check verbs as well. Moreover, I don't have enough knowledge and I am not a tutor; however, I believe using two or more connectors like you have used to begin with in the first BP and on the contrary in the next while revealing advantages, you used both in promoting merits since on the contrary is used for conflicting the former viewpoint. Sir, it has become my doubt too can we use it like this?
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