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Essay. July 14

 

Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. What problem has this caused? What solutions can you suggest to this issue?


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Over the past few decades, the media has portrayed thin women as perfect. This scenario invites plenty of troubles in society. Therefore, this essay will discuss the solutions to this problem in detail. 

To begin with, society faces a number of troubles owing to this concept. These days, the modelling industry allures numerous young women if they are thin. Therefore, females suffer from an emotional disorder named Anorexia Nervosa since they refrain away from proper diet mechanisms to achieve a slim-trim body. According to a few newspapers, the two-fifths proportion of girls is facing anorexia due to the fact they are being hospitalized. Moreover, if they fail to achieve a slim body, stress and anxiety gulp them, and ultimately, some among them commit suicide. Furthermore, this fashion forces them to opt for cosmetic surgeries due to the fact they get deleterious consequences. 

This issue cannot be uprooted completely; however, can be restricted up to a large extent by making young girls aware of the problems associated with it. First of all, the media ought to change this image and must broadcast the vision of girls as strong as possible. Instead of emphasising celebrities and models, the media should focus on legendary personalities such as Malala Yousafzai, Munia Mazari and Marie Kom. Secondly, the government should organize awareness camps about women's empowerment to make young girls aware of the real world and other fruitful aspects. 

To conclude, this problem is getting bigger with each day and has started swallowing numerous lives. As a result, the authorities must ask every type of media to broadcast motivational dramas along with proper job opportunities for the girls where getting a thin body is unnecessary. 

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